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posted by Free_Spirit
Me: okay this is a short story i came up with. I know its a little bit drepressing but i was in a really bad mood. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. Sorry i put that in caps cause people will notice it better. Okay enjoy. oh AND PLEASE RATE. Ps sorry if the name is a little bit weird. Have any sugesstions i would love to hear

I start as the rain begins to fall. Great i thought darkly. I didn't like the rain, i always thought it emphasised how bad this world really is. I waited impatiently for class to end. The class was playing soccer and the other kids seemed to love the rain while playing. I...
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posted by edward-lover456
My heart keeps breaking
each time I'm taking
a bigger slice out of my heart
it feels like I'm the dart
they trow at the board
hit a score then there threw
and all i can do is sit back
relax and try to see what I lack
I ask myself what the problem was
and all he does
is sit there and laugh
until the day
I get up and scream at him
and they all get scared and run
I've had my fun
I go back to the corner and contemplated what I have done and make fun!
now when I cry there tears of joy!
and if that boy
ever thinks his coming back
I no were the shotguns at!
posted by Myf_1992
Ok, so I wrote this when I was 15 as English Lit coursework. Its a horror prose, inspired by Edgar Allan Poe's The Tell-Tale Heart. I have tweaked it since then, but its basically the same, so tell me what you think =]

My Shadow

    Hate, like liquid fire surging through your veins, a blazing fist squeezing your heart and lungs. You may say you hate school, or that you hate that bitch, but you have no idea. You have no idea. Hate is so intense, so blinding, it demands action and attention! You have no idea. It burns so deeply into the soul, you will be scarred for life. It...
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posted by HuddyBrave
One night I couldnt sleep and i heard the sound of rain on my roof so i wrote this....I didnt really have a story that was written before that i just wrote it. Tell me what you think .... :)
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Then suddnely the rain started to fall. I watched it fall gracefully as if the world was ok as if there was no poverty as if there was no death as if there was no sadness.Everyone around me started to rush in doors afraind to get wet. I just stood there and let all of my worries be washed off of me, I didnt really mind the wet. I liked the way the rain fell on me as if it was saying...
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posted by edward-lover456
Please tell me if you want another part! Thankyou please enjoy!



"Kira" I yelled trying to find her. I could only imagine that she was scared and alone! We had went hunting and she had saw a deer and she just had to have it! I waited and waited for her to come back but as I waited I started to get worried! I herd a scream from her and I ran to look but as I found her she had blood over her face she looked full I asked her what the madder was and she said "Claria why haven't you ate?" "I ate before we came" "okay" she said with a smirk! "lets go home before mom gets worried and wipe of you're fangs Kira they have blood all over them" "fine" she said
posted by edward-lover456
I feel the hole that's left in my heart from were you left.
I see you'r face every were I look, I wonder if you'r thinking of me, I miss you'r smile. I miss you'r laugh, But mostly I miss you. I cry myself to sleep every night i hold tight to the pillow thinking it's you. My heart crys for you every time I see a couple hold hands. I can remember you telling me I was you'r world but then you left me here to die all alone in an empty world! I relize now that you were all I had. I keep thinking of you and remembering you but It does me no good you'r not really there you'r just a dream a sweet sweet...
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posted by oxblondiexo
I did a semester of poetry in English at my high school. I had to right 4, and this one is my favourite. It's a narrative poem.

Wind catches the sand,
Throwing it at me
Stinging my ankles like angry bees,
Like vicious teeth

A gust blows the grains to my face,
Making me splutter and spit
Eager to escape,
I run to the crashing ocean

The waves are ferocious,
Pulling me under
The suns heat blocked out
Warmth stolen from my skin

Trapped in a current,
Legs thrashing,
Water tugging at me from every direction,
I slip beneath
posted by kelilina
Out of touch with the world...
Trying to hide inside so I don't hurt.
The little girl inside me with her mouth wide open
screaming with grief and heartache.
A soundless scream full of pain, broken dreams
a house blown away by the storm.
She's crying out to you.
Why don't you hear her..see her..hold her.
You don't want to look beyond your need, you left
her behind.
Who was there to teach her, her worth? Who told her
she was special to them? Who showed her what
a strong woman she would be?
She looked to herself as she grew to be me.
In spite of you I found my own worth. In spite
of you I became special...
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posted by edward-lover456
David and Molly
David and Molly
thanks for reading pls tell me if you would like a part seven in the
comments! enjoy!

The Golden Tear part six
Liz pulled out a gun and said" ready to die Rebecca" and then she
shot and hit Rebecca in the heart. Rebecca's last words were "tell the
kids I love them" and then she died. I looked at Liz with shock and
said "Liz baby put the gun down" Liz looked at me "Why should I
I could kill all of you and all I would do is go to jail why stop now"
"because Liz I am your aunt and I love you" "yeah that's what my
mom said before she kicked me out" and she shot me in my leg and
she ran to my car and...
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posted by edward-lover456
The Golden Tear part five
Liz said "uh uh Eva?" I said "yeah it's me Liz oh my goodness Lis
Steve set you up" and then Steve walked out from behind the counter
and said "yea verry good Eva" Liz said "um Steve what are you doing
here you said I needed to getsomething for you" and Steve said "yeah
you need to get Rebecca's kids back to her" and then Rebecca walked
out from the bathroom and said "Eva give me my babies back" I said
"No never not after what you did to them" and she said "what did I
ever do to them but give them life" I said "you no what you did Rebecca
you told Mr. Dean that it was okay...
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posted by edward-lover456
The Golden Tear part four
thx for reading injoy!
"And no-one will get hurt" I said "oh oh okay?" the vioce said "now
Eva I see Liz has came to town and you wouldent want anything to
happen to little Liz would you?" "well no" and he said "good start
repeting me now yes I'll be there right away" "yes I'll be there right
away" and he said "good now come to the cofe shop on the corner
of Wallens street my employey will be wating for you" I said "alright"
and then I huge up the phone, then I called the nanny Mrs.Plan and
said kids me and Liz have some arrens to run so Mrs. Plan will be here
okay?" the kids...
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posted by edward-lover456
if you would like a part four just tell me in the comments please
thankyou for reading injoy!
The Golden Tear part three
"Someone killed Mrs. Frendlen" she spoke soft like velvet or silk
and with that pice of infomation I jumped out of bed and walked
into the dinning room and to my serprice Molly and David were in
there with Cheese my hamster Molly got up from the floor and said
"Mama Eva I can't belive you have a hamster" "yeah I do well that
was you'r gift I guess you got it early" and than Liz said "Oh Eva
i'm sorry I thaught it was okay to play with Cheese and then
Molly woke up so I let her play...
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posted by _Blackhearts_xx
this is kinda like a song, so some of it repeats but otherwise yea, enjoy


Whats the use in fighting this war,
Knowing that i'll never be yours,
Whats the use in putting up a fight,
Knowing you don't want me in your life,

Is this really worth fighting for?
Or should we even the score,
And leave this alone,
Once and for all,

Your what im fighting for,
Your what i want and more,
I know we can win this war,
'Cause love is worth fighting for,

Is this really worth fighting for?
Or should we even the score,
And leave this alone,
Once and for all,

Why are we at war?
You got me wondering what im fighting for,
I should...
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posted by _Blackhearts_xx
The pain in my heart is to strong,
As it is for you that i long,

You came to me suddenly,
I fell inlove with you almost instantly

You stole my heart, but ran away,
Leaving me in sorrow, and in wonder of why you came,

Was it in the intention of this heartbreak;
Or was it to achieve all the sorrow you could create?

In your eyes, i was easy to lure,
You said you were sick, and that i was the cure,

I feel like such a fool,
I cant believe i fell for you,

My love for you has become like rain,
As my heart bleeds in pain,

The memories now being to play,
I only wish you stayed.

My mind keeps displaying,
Images of us talking and laughing,

I couldent see the bad,
You seemed like a decent man,

But i guess i was wrong,
This is just another fairytale gone wrong



xx
posted by edward-lover456
if you would like a part three just write a comment saying you
would thank you for reading enjoy!

The Golden Tear part two
and I saw police at every corner and then Molly was to my side
she asked me "Eva I mean Mom What is going on?" And I got
down on one knee were I could see her eye to eye she has the
most beautiful Green eyes I have ever saw and I said "Molly
baby doll you don't have to call me mom if your not ready to, and
I really don't know what happened" and I started to walk to the
kitchen to get her some warm milk to help her back to sleep and
then I asked her "Molly are you happy that...
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posted by monLOVEbrucas
poem 1

The step that I took
The fear in my eyes
That electric feel that ran through my body
It got me where I am today.
It made me who I am because I am with you.
It got me to realize that things do come true,
And fairy tales aren’t always dreams.
You and your self make me smile when I sleep at night.
And when I think about it, it always feels so right to be here with you.

poem 2

And in the end I followed my heart but tore his all apart.
I mean where we going to last.
Was it lust or love we were feeling?
I take his hand and kiss it goodbye
All I see is tears in his eyes.
How can I turn and walk away...
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posted by edward-lover456
Golden tear
Golden tear
thanks for reading and if you would like write a comment saying
you would like part two enjoy!

"I woke up and I heard screams,screams of people in the room next
to mine. I ran quickly to the closet were I had hide my gun and I
it took all the courage I had in me to go into that room and I'm
thrilled I did I had saved three life's A woman's and two amazing
children's lives." I wiped off the tear that was crawling down my
cheek. "As I was walking in to the room I heard a mans voice
Mr. Deans voice say drop the gun Eve or or die so I looked up
and shot I shot him I shot Mr. Dean" I said and than...
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posted by monLOVEbrucas
POEM 1 -
I stare all the time at the face that makes my heart drop.
I listen all the time to the voice that makes me shiver.
It’s so hard to be in control when he has the power.
I want to tell him I really do.
But I can’t.
So everyday I will be imaging and saying to my self like
If only he knew.



POEM 2 -
We only get one chance to live life.
And I blew it.
Living life for me was being in love.
Being in love was like explosions in my stomach
Fireworks in my heart
And this magical feeling that only I could feel
Now the explosions in my stomach are like rocks thrown into me
Fireworks in my heart are...
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posted by xxXsk8trXxx
I woke up, scared. I was in a dark room with only the light of a window.
Slowly getting up, the window light got dimmer and dimmer. Finally, it was jet black.
I heard a voice in my ear whispering "Hell, hell, hell." I was scared to death. I tried to run, but the whisper was chasing me. I was scared to death.
Then, someone caught me. They draged me outside the window, where a white like shone. As we got onto the ground to the dark night, the person dragged me across the silent and creepy woods.
It was dawn by the time I reached a cabin in the middle of the woods. I was put on what seemed to be...
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posted by edward-lover456
tell me if you want me to finish this story! thx 4 reading!

"Monica" I heard my mom say "we are going to be late." So I looked up at the white clock my mom had hanging in the hallway and yelled "i'm coming." Nick my yonger brother was yelling "come on sis I don't wanna be late again Mrs.Wilson already said if i am late again I get to go see Mrs.Hall the principle." So I sreamed back "maybe a trip to the principles office will do you some good." And I ran down the steps into the white and yellow kitchen and told my mom "come on lets go"