Zanpakuto-normal katana
Shikai Appearance-two guns with crosses on them one red one white
Shikai powers-The one with the white cross fires out compressed reiatsu and the red one fire cero. when combined they can fire a bala.
Bankai-A scythe that has a black blade and a red handle. it can fire a cero in the form of something like a getsuga tensho. It can also turn into a sickle with a chain that has a weight on the end of it that smashes into opponent with brutal force.
Background story-was a captain of the soul soceity but was banished when they saw his shikai. he used his shikai when defending his squad from a rouge captain. then he went and joined the vizards. with intense training he eventually learned to control his powers.

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For your manga
my characters name would be Shadow Mazingo.
his weapons spirit would be a man in a mask with his body covered completly in a black cloak.
His sword would look exactly like the one in the picture.
Its abilities would involve lightning.
His first one would be to have lighting strike the enemy from the sky. the second one would be to have lighting envelope the sword and completely replace the sword allowing me full control over lightning and allowing me to create it.
He also wears a mask but it only covers up to his nose.
As far as he knows he has no relatives or past because he lost his memory in a battle. He wears a torn up red cloak at all times and never takes it off. So what do you think. tell me if i need to work on it

its good, but you need to create 10 moves from weakest to strongest, up to two ways of fighting (kido, kickboxing, etc)also your character can be affiliated with any of mine, ill tell ou the character's info later.
here let me create an example:

Character name: Sora Kurosaka
Weapon: long golden staff (the rod itself weighs 8100 kg) - The spirit is The monkey king (see my page to view the pic)
Fighting styles: drunken monkey staff/ Close combat (like soi fon and youruichi, you can compare the fighting ability from someone you know from another manga)
Bio: Sora was once a legend and one of the 3 most feared warriors in the spiritual realm. He has super strength do to how heavy his rod weighs and how easily he can move it, and he has incredible speed (somewhat like youruichi has, but like 5 times faster)His guardian Son Wukong (the monkey king), who stands along side him as a golden staff could defeat any opponent no matter how strong. Though through much of the fighting, he saw that war amongst the seven kings (Seven powerful warriors that have completely synched with their guardians and fight together with their Generals/ Commanders to keep peace in the spiritual realm more like the government in ancient Japan.) and the Oni Warlords (10 warriors who have not only achieved their own Oni guardians, but can transform them selves into Oni Release after Spirit Synch) was not protecting or inproving the spiritual realm. Now he protects his home town Kagebura from anyone by creating stone replicas of the seven kings to guard it. He has never been touched during battle and has never lost. He is a very calm and wise man and I alittle bit of a perv, with green hair and tattered cloths (Pic on my profile as Bad @$$ dude I think). He never has used his Spirit Synch except once to kill a demon king who has been reincarnated in a new body as an Oni Warlord. He currently has no friends do to me not having enough characters, but that’s all I got so far.
Move set:

Move 1- He can create a copy of himself, with a weapon, by plucking out one strand of his hair and blowing it forward. The hair then transforms into the copy (good for multiple enemies, or as a distraction so he can observe the opponent)
Move 2-. He can change the size of the rod, width or length.
Move 3- He can make multiple copies of the rod by making the rod levitate and waving his hand across the other empty areas around the rod, just like the blind guy with those blades when fighting zaraki, they he usually shoots them at the opponent.
Move 4: “Monkey palm” (attacks with names must be italicized) uses pure energy from his palm to create a force that sends anything in front of the palm back.
Move 5: “Huo Yan Jin Jing” or “Fiery Golden Eyes which causes Sora to see through illusions, transformations, and disguise when he releases the eye ability.
Move 6- Spirit synchronize (only people who have bonded with their guardian can fuse with them, making their thoughts, mind, and strength one though it is different for many people) Soras’ causes a golden explosion to emanate from him blinding the enemy for 10 seconds. When the golden energy fades, his appearance is still the same but he has golden spiky hair like the monkey king, a tail, and the monkey kings cloths. Though since his is so strong, he ends up turning to stone and can’t escape unless someone has the ability to release him.
Move 7- He can draw a invisible circle around himself with the rod that protects him from anything as long as he doesn’t go out (good for protecting groups of people because he could make a large circle quite easily know do to his speed)
Move 8- can create stone replicas of anyone he remembers with the same abilities
Move 9- . He has the ability to point at an enemy and completely immobilized him as long as he points, think of it as paralyzed by being pointed at, but the enemy can’t be stronger or as strong as he is or else it has no affect.
Move 10- And finally and probably the most devastating power ever “GO-RUDEN SENDO TACCHI” or “golden death touch”. This power is so insane because anything he touches…well, turns to gold no matter what it is, energy, human, non human, inanimate…anything! Even getsuga :O. Then my character can easily shatter the gold to cause instant death. So it works out for being so scary and devastating….. Though after he uses his Spirit Synch, he

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Name:NarZat Yusima

Rank:Old Captian of Squad 9

Zampakuto:Coszamari-A thin black and blue sword-spirit of the blue flame dragon

Release Form:Bleed Coszamari-A huge two sided blade weighing bout 1500 pounds that also makes him 12xstronger,12xfaster,and his skin 12xtougher

Bankai:Burn all to ashes-Shoots a blue flame thats traps the enemies in a cube that burns at 5000 degrees

fighting style:kickboxing/Kido

Bio:NarZat Yusima was captian of squad nine and the thrid one to gradute with Shunsui Kyoraku and Jushiro Ukitake. During his 8th year as captian he was order along wit Captian of squad 12 to take his squad into Hueco Mundo to captured a hollow name Barquka thats was killing soul reapers and taking over their bodies for his on skeems. When they went to hueco mundo they was trap by a thousand hollows 12members in his squad died during that fight. Thats when Captian Yusima came and kill them with ease using his kido. After the fight they was order to come back to soul society without Barquka.But Captian Yusima wanted to check out more within the area in order to find Barquka.But the other captian wasn't haven't it. so Captian Yusima use a forbidden kido call mind control to change Captian of squad 12 and his squad's minds in order move on ahead. thats when they came back wit Barquka in chians. at the time he was in charge of questining inturders and enemies of the soul socitey. When Barquke was in jail he keep saidin that he had nuthing to do with that. So later that night Yusima try using his mind control on him but realize it had no affect on him thats when Barquka said that he knows wat yusima been doin late at night sneakin in Hueco Mundo killin hollows and soul reapers and using mind control on them.And was tryin to get him to say that he was doing the killings. with that in mind Captian Yusima use the forbidden kido call chaos moires and death sight to kill him before he was able to tell the others and told them that he tried to excape. later the following week Captian Yusima was arrested by soul society for planin an attack on soul socitey and for usin forbidden kido. afew captians was wondeing about where he was always goin to at night so afew captians use cloth to hide their spirit pressure to follow and find out what he's up to thats when they saw wat he was doin. and that he was the one taking over soul reapers bodies by controling their minds and making them attack other soul reapers. he was question why was he doin this he answer that he doesn't want to serve under them and was tried of being given order.so he was blind folded and sent to prison for the rest of his life. but he still had control over afew captians and vice-captians so he had them attack soul society and kill the other captians leaving soul society disarranged as a way to destroy
Seireitei and show that he can't be stop so he use that to excape to the real world and was able to premently hide his spirit pressure and was never heard from again.

skills:Way of Blinding

No.4-Pale lighting

No.21-Cloning of the self-lets the user make a clone of him self with only half the power of the user

No.31-Shots of red fire

No.33-blue fire,crash down

No.34-Suspending Star

No.38-Blinding Chains

Ocean waves crashing onto the surface,:Way of Blinding No.41-Water Clycone

No.44-Lighting Shot

No.48-Hydro Blast-a powerful blast of water that crushes the insides of a enemy's body

No.54-Abloishing flames

No.62-Pressure Crush-forces a large amount of spirit pressure to one body crushing them

No.63-Twin lotus blue fire,crash down

Earth rising to the skies from the ground below:Way of Blinding No.66-Stone Wall

Fire burns, ashes from the demons mouth:Way of Blinding No.80-Dragon Flame Cannon

No.81-Splitting void

No.84-ground smash-hits the ground cause it to break apart

No.88-flying dragon-striking Heaven-shaking Thunder cannon

No.90-Black coffin

Bleed this world of the evil of mankind and seperate the light from the dark: Way of Blinding No.91-Darkness cube-surrounds the enemy in darkness within a 1block ratio that no one can enter or escape once in it.

No.93-Ice clone-creates a clone make of ice that when a enemy attacks it. it releases a thousand ice needles that kills the enemy if not block

Feel the pain from the blood spill by man:way of blinding No.98-Chaos moires-it enters the mind of a enemy making their mind think that they're beenin stab for years and leaving them and the user's body motionless untill the user is attack

Ripe the soul from the cold hearted and banish it from the darkness:Way of Blinding No.99-Death sight-only works when chaos moires is use on a enemy its completely removes the soul of ones mind turnin their eyes as black as coal leaving them lifeless but also drains the energy of the user

type:vizard
name:hi-kia
birth date:march 9,1991
gender:male
looks:short, strong, tanned and very built
his mask is half smiling half crying
Hair color: changing every other week not even he knows his true hair color
hair style:spiked
eyes:no pupils or iris, his eyes are completely white
height: 5'1"
weight:150 lbs
well built
personality:kind and polite, over all a great guy but mess with his
friends and your dead
history:made in a lab had o contact with humans till he was 5 when he died and went to the spirit world where he had a chance to start his life over.
likes:getting stronger so he can protect his friends
dislikes:bullies and violence
battle data:will never start a fight without reason, YOU DO NOT WANT TO GIVE HIM A REASON
fighting style:loose fighting style, tries to disarm rather than kill.
ZANPAKUTO:shadow (kage)
Zanpakuto/Shikai name:
Release command: tsukisasu ni kurai(stab in the dark)
shikai description: a blade that cant be seen in any way other but by looking at its shadow, where ever the weapon impacts the opponents shadow it causes damage
Shadow Boxing: sword changes in 2 gauntlets with spikes on the knuckle, still unseen except in shadow
Dancing with the Shadow:shadows of all fighters start rotating around their owners'.
Banki: owner becomes a shadow and the opponent(s) can only injure him by attacking the shadow, depending on the opponent they may or may not be able to see in both the shadow land and well as the real world
clarification: shadow land is a land in which shadows exist in 3d
p.s. those who can see are at a disadvantage as he is in a 3d world and weaker enemies can only see 2d

Name: Karo Samarama
Rank: Former Captain of squad 11
zampakuto- katana
Shikai name- kirā fū
Shikai appearance- something like big katana with abilities of wind
Bankai name- kirā fū hamā
bankai appearance- bankai its not normal bankai my katana its turning into axe not bik but powerful

Zampakuto:

Shikai:

Bankai:

you said your MANGA will be different from BLEACH??
soo my idea for a character sword swordskills and fighting styles..
will be...

this will be more different..

sword name: roku oni "sixth demon"

*chaos slash - the blade releases a single negative energy to strike down enemies

*orb of corruption - the blade's hilt releases a foul negative orb that corrupts enemies for a period of time. the effect will be taking the enemies to feel poisoned

*bloodlust - the blade enhances the user's blood energies to enrage its inner desire to kill. it makes the user insane and will lust for battle and blood.

*twisting nether - makes the user have the ability to manipulate space and time for a spec of time. the user will be able to teleport anywhere. ( after using this skill it makes the user extremely weak for a period of time due to breaking the natural law time and space)

*unstable concotion - makes the user fight in extremities slashing enemies to its death. the user will continue to fight until the target dies or the target will be able to stop the user.

*insatiable hunger - the user gains the ability to steal half of the life of the targeted enemy per hit, this means that life regeneration inreases rapidly.

*howl of the demon - makes the user howl in extremely making all targeted enemies experience great fear and brings down a heavenies feeling in the battlefield.

*presence of corruption(aura) - the blade releases a corrupting aura around the user making all enemies near the user reduce all their regenerating abilities and weakens all their defences.

*deathblow - the blade releases the power of death in one blow that could critically damage the target or ultimately kill the target.

*el diabolis dentro(the devil within) - the blade releases its final form making the user turn into a devil, gaining "the ASTRAL CLAWS", "the DEMONIC HORNS" and "the DEVIL WINGS" increases greatly its strength and defence

fighting styles:

*CHAOS MODE - this mode greatly increases the speed, evasiveness, defence and regeneration of the user.

*ASTRAL MODE - this mode can only be used after casting the last spell (el diabolis dentro) since after the spell is cast the user gains the ASTRAL CLAWS, thus making the user powerful in melee combat. during this mode the user fights rapidly scratches enemies without halting.
- this mode ultimately increases speed attack speed and power but decreases greatly defence

my sword looks like this..