I'm going to start writing a fan fic in the world of Bleach with my own character. Tell me what you think of her!


My Zanpaktou.
Name-不安の風 (Unsettling winds) *Fuan no Kaze*
Shikai name-引き裂かれた空 (Torn sky) *Hikisaka re ta sora*
Release-人生のオークから秋 (Fall from the oak of life) *Jinsei no ōku kara aki*
Description of Shikai abilities- Hikisaka re ta sora has a pulling effect that makes it the center of gravity for enemies. It pulls all oxygen from the air and suffocates the enemy while they cannot get to the wielder, for the wielder has made Hikisaka re ta sora the center of gravity. Enemies fall stumble and fail to reach the wielder before they die of suffocation. The wielder has to be moving at all times while Kikisaka re ta sora is released.
Shikai (physical) description- The sword is pale blue and jagged not straight. The hilt is white with pale blue ribbon and three small white bells. The sword is not very long, only 2 feet.
Bankai name-分周器 (The divider) *Bun Shū-ki*
Description of Bankai abilities- When spun, Bun shu-ki makes an invisible and unbreakable wall that suspends all in the air, those who are in the air have no control over their bodies. The wielder throws hot air spears at those who are imprisoned, all the while trying to still spin the Bun shu-ki. The spears of air are formed from Bun shu-ki’s vibrating crystal hairs, it is highly difficult for the wielder to get a hold of them. But once they do, the spears of air also start to vibrate and become insanely hot. The wielder is not hurt by they’re Bun shu-ki but they become very weak after using it, weaker than the usual soul reaper. The wielder cannot move during this phase.
Bankai (physical) description- Bun shu-ki transforms into a long polearm. The staff is swirled and white. The tip when looked at by the naked eye seems to be deep blue hair that flays out in all directions. While actually the -hair- is extremely thin pieces of vibrating crystal. The end of the Bun shu-ki is pointed into a cone shape, this is the only sword part of the polearm.



My Bleach Character
Name-Kohana Koizumi (Little flower, Little spring)
Appearance- Short light blue hair, that flays out, it goes a bit below the bottom of the ear. On each side of her head there is a long lock of hair, that goes about breast level. Calm, wise, light green eyes. She has a small nose and skin that is very pale, almost white but with cheeks almost always a little pink. She is 5’3 and is a lightweight. Most people can pick her out from saying that she has a long scar on her left hand. It starts at the knuckle of the pointer finger and goes up to the pit of her elbow. She has very long fingers and small feet. She chews her fingers though, around every finger tip it seems to be calloused. She’s not the most gifted girl, she doesn’t have big breasts.
Personality- She’s very calm and collected. She’s shy and has stage-fright but when you get to know her she’ll act silly and goof around. She’s very kind and whole-hearted. She is an extremely focused person and is always doing something. If she isn’t doing something, she’s listening to music or sleeping. She always has this look on her face like she’s asking a bunch of questions to herself. When she smiles you can barely see her eyes. She doesn’t get mad very easily. She likes to work with Kidou and practice with it. She is also a Flash Step Grand-Master. She likes to wear Victorian style clothes that have an antique essence to them. Her favorite colors to wear and black, white, and blue. She loves jeans but not if they’re skinny. She’s decently smart, but she excels in language arts and English, also she can speak 5 different languages. She is a master swordsman and enjoys making weapons and such in her free time. She loves to draw and she can play the piano professionally. She’s rumored to have family descended from royalty.
Other- Kohana was previously a living person. She grew up with her grandmother, not knowing of her father or her mother’s whereabouts. She died at the age of 18 when she was on a plane returning from meeting her father for the first time in her life. He was a good man, but, he was a soul reaper, and he didn’t want Kohana involved when she was living.
Kohana has a pet cat named Miki (Beautiful Story). Miki is always with Kohana, they haven’t parted since birth, when Kohana’s grandmother’s cat had kittens the same day Kohana was born. Miki died with Kohana on that plane, and there bond was so tight that they traveled together to the soul society.
Kohana is still training in the soul society to become a full fledged soul reaper.