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The critic game!

ok! so here it goes:
post a picture you drew and the person below you will give you a critic on your art
also if you'd be so kind could you also give me a critic id love it and i will also critic you as well
so have fun and learn!
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Love your artstyle. It's really unique. Great job!
msbass posted over a year ago
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oh thank you so much!
smartone123 posted over a year ago
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what do you mean could use some work?like whats wrong?
smartone123 posted over a year ago
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ShiraKishi said:
For this drawing,40/100? Maybe,right?
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For this drawing,40/100? Maybe,right?
posted over a year ago 
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um did you read the rules? your suppose to critic it and also post a peice you did yourself so some else can critic it
smartone123 posted over a year ago
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I see.Sorry
ShiraKishi posted over a year ago
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Read your profile wall,is written clearly there.Thanks for your feedback.
ShiraKishi posted over a year ago
dontmindmeyo said:
Yours is gorgeous! I absolutely love your colouring/shading style! Only thing that feels a bit off is the way the neck is bent. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's not anything major. Everything else looks awesome though.

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im not the best artist out there but hey ive really improved from when i first started so i guess i'll post
yeah she's not really an anime character but and the quality is kind of :/ but
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Yours is gorgeous! I absolutely love your colouring/shading style! Only thing that feels a bit off is the way the neck is bent. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's not anything major. Everything else looks awesome though. meh im not the best artist out there but hey ive really improved from when i first started so i guess i'll post yeah she's not really an anime character but and the quality is kind of :/ but
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thank you very much XD yours is cute the bodies proportions are good but the shoulders are abit weird and the clothes lack movement and wrinkles.Also shading would be good.work on those and it would help you alot XD
smartone123 posted over a year ago
msbass said:
My drawing of Gilbert ^.^
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My drawing of Gilbert ^.^
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the lines are clean,the colors are nice and the drawing is well put so nice work there.Though this isnt a original drawing its a copy right,if not then nice work and the only other thing i think it would need is fundamental shadows at the least.Overall nice work just fix the shaodw problem and experiment with your own sstyle if you want to improve as an artist
smartone123 posted over a year ago
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Thank you a lot for your kind critique. I understand what you mean about the shadowing. This drawing indeed does not have the greatest shadowing but it is a lot better when seeing it on the actual paper. My scanner couldn't clearly bring out the little shadowing I had used. :/ But again thanks a lot about your kind words ^.^ And ofc I will try to improve my skills!
msbass posted over a year ago
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@SketchWreckThank you so much for your kind critique; I understand about the problem with the shadowing...it was better on paper but my scanner messed it up a little, next time I will make it more intense...
msbass posted over a year ago
SketchWreck said:
So here's mine! ^^

The one on the left is Light and the one on the right is L, both from Death Note. :))
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So here's mine! ^^ The one on the left is Light and the one on the right is L, both from Death Note. :))
posted over a year ago 
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Srry If it's too fresh. This was a fanservice drawing >/////< but still, im very proud of it and it's one of my best works. :))
SketchWreck posted over a year ago
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its pretty good man! the body movements have ife and the clothes have good wrinkles and the shadows are nice.I think the neck and chins is what id work on but since its anime its forgivable.Nice work always improve man XD also i love L
smartone123 posted over a year ago
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I love the movement of both Light and L~ Great job on that. You could work a little bit more on making the line work cearer. But definately the drawing is pretty good~
msbass posted over a year ago
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