Alright so like two weeks ago was the premier of the second Fionna and Cake titled "Bad Little Boy". Being a huge fan of Marshall lee and Fionna ( hence my username) I was just a little bit disappointed with the episode.
I got really pissed off at the first part when Ice King started telling the story but I got really exited when Marceline came into the story. But, there was a problem for me, I knew that the episode would be a lot shorter now with the cut scene into the "real world".
I think that the best part of Adventure Time's "Bad Little Boy" was the song ( and actually hearing Marshall talk). Not the rap which was also pretty awesome but being a Fiolee fan meant that Marshall was being "evil". More to the thought his "being evil" would just basically be flirting, because let's face it, he has a HUGE thing for Fionna and he wants her to have it for him too.
In conclusion Cartoon Network could've done a slightly better job on like the highlight of my entire week. I'm such a big fan that I think of like 50 different scenarios whenever wherever. I know this is a really crappy opinion but I just needed to get it out of my head, and at least Bad Little Boy was better than the first F and C
I got really pissed off at the first part when Ice King started telling the story but I got really exited when Marceline came into the story. But, there was a problem for me, I knew that the episode would be a lot shorter now with the cut scene into the "real world".
I think that the best part of Adventure Time's "Bad Little Boy" was the song ( and actually hearing Marshall talk). Not the rap which was also pretty awesome but being a Fiolee fan meant that Marshall was being "evil". More to the thought his "being evil" would just basically be flirting, because let's face it, he has a HUGE thing for Fionna and he wants her to have it for him too.
In conclusion Cartoon Network could've done a slightly better job on like the highlight of my entire week. I'm such a big fan that I think of like 50 different scenarios whenever wherever. I know this is a really crappy opinion but I just needed to get it out of my head, and at least Bad Little Boy was better than the first F and C
But I got the first episode (chapter) down. Dunno if I can post the writing part of it down today, but I'll try. It's only a few paragraphs long, but I'm considering making it longer, with your help if you'd like. I'm usually a self-hater so I won't really like it when I post it cause that's just me, I guess lol
I'll post it and ask what I should change with it. I'll add commentary throughout the chapter so it's easier to understand. :D
And yeah, it'll still be animated, just not yet. I'm planning on writing the whole story out for you to read and visualize so it'll be easier to make.
I'll post it and ask what I should change with it. I'll add commentary throughout the chapter so it's easier to understand. :D
And yeah, it'll still be animated, just not yet. I'm planning on writing the whole story out for you to read and visualize so it'll be easier to make.
Fathers and Sons
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank you for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a day man."Jake said as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something more than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank you for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a day man."Jake said as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something more than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.
This is me happy.
