Cinders: Exposed: A Monologue

amazondebs ha ha ha brilliantly funny intro & bloopers however although the piece kept me interested and i would have definitely kept watching but i don't think there is enough there for me to give any real feedback (dunno if you were looking for any) except from i think you have spent too long on fanpop as you introduced your name as cinders lol

_lina_ That was hilarious :) Love your earrings, by the way.

Cinders I have a personal critique-- get my fucking hand away from my fucking mouth. LOL! Thanks debs and lina!

ineedcoffee f**k me! loved the bloopers...lol

aholic You're so hilarious!

claire-aka-bob lol loved it, and just like ineedcoffee said...f**k me! ♥

edennirvana *applause* Loved it! Ooh, the hair flipping...I think I know a little about that, hahaha! ;)

Saul_Mikoliunas "The perfect..DAMNIT" I personally think this line is better than the original. "Impossible to misread all the ambiguity drained out of the image, fuck me, fuck me, fuck me." Excellent line. I'm not normally one for text speak but lol.

dazl *hug*

Kegel Very funny! lol :D

ToastedRabbits You are brilliant! xD I love the bloopers and the whole trying to get the camera and hair right thing. I think it went over very well when you finally got it down though. =)

harold Very well crafted, and very funny. Somehow I never imagined you using so many, like, [i]fillers[/i]? But then, I do, too. I'm Californian - we're infamous for it! What's bugging me, though, is that I know this story - the scenario you present in the monologue. Is there a reason I know this story? Have you talked about this play, or presented the premise elsewhere on the site?

Cinders I did mention this monologue here: http://www.fanpop.com/spots/debate/forum/post/8773

dave You clearly have a future career in acting Cinders, but if not, your film editing skills are superb. :) High-larity.

harold Whew - thanks! That was driving me [i]nuts[/i]. ... ...I know. I can't blame it on this.

khfan12 you're pretty, cinders and you are a good actress.

nosemuffin Hilarious! And, it would seem that we share a favorite expletive phrase.

Cinders Wow! Thanks, khfan! nosemuffin, you're a riot! LOVE YOU GUYS!

ShadowFlame Oo, i saw this on youtube!!!!!!!!!

Cinders HI! If I may, I can return this up to working standards by next week. As of late, I do not have the file on my computer to reupload it to my new YouTube account. I have it on my OTHER computer-- the one in Seattle-- but I am in DC right now. But if you want to delete it, I'll just reupload it again later I suppose... It would just be easier if you'd be patient.